


So, I've always read about people blogging and i didn't really understand, how can people basically put their diaries on display for the millions of people out there to read and critique..totally strangeness..i now understand that it doesn't have to be like a diary, so mines just going to be random thoughts and stories that my fanciful mind has the privilege of thinking up...this is a story i wrote today for no reason other than i was that bored in Business class..
I want my pen to craft a beautiful story for me, tell a twisting tale that takes no effort from my brain. Sadly, that just wont happen, and i have yet to conceive a way to thoughtlessly create a masterpiece.
There she sat, anxiously awaiting next to the noisy waterfall, to preoccupied with her nervous tension to really give tribute to the beauty surrounding her. Reality flashes in and out while she stares unknowingly into space. To the left of her creeps up the dreaded person she awaits. Yet she hardly notices as the thoughts from her mind cascade around in front of her vision distracting from the nature and movement she resides in. As he comes ever closer her brain awakes and sets out a red alert. Her whole body tenses subconsciously pulling in to look smaller, creating a more littler target to behold. With each step that brings the retched boy nearer, her breathing gets a bit faster. She closes her eyes with anticipation and counts to ten to regulate her body and settle her nerves. She senses the tap on her shoulder before she feels it and reacts as if it were a punch. Her head swivels to the left and her eyes seek out the moss green ovals that epitomize the devil.
Well at least to her they do..
There he was minding his own business, when she jumped out at him. Metaphorically of course, but oh how he wished she really would have. As he gazed at her, his footsteps unconsciously moved in her direction as if of their own will. How his eyes doted upon her beauty, far out weighing the surrounding nature that captures most. As his feet brought him closer he noted how reserved she became, finally coming to attention and drawing that light of beauty that pooled around her back inside to be dammed up behind her translucent eyes. At least, he remarked, he could catch glimpses of the wild beauty if he fell into her eyes and swam there. Yet as soon as he set his fingers lightly on her shoulder, he felt her nervous tension snap and quickly he snatched back his cold fingers as she pulled away. Reproachfully her eyes looked up, daring him to speak, and stilling his breath as it readied itself to leap from his tongue. She held his gaze and as he felt himself falling into the unfathomable orbs, he hesitated. She despised him, he could tell, resented him for everything he stood for even though she knew he could be the one to love her. So he hesitated (who wouldn't??) to jump right in as the animosity emanating from her slight body ate into him pushing him away and creating a barrier between them. He stepped back, not saying a word, white flag waving, she had won this battle...for now.
As a resentful loaded breath escaped his lips, a relieved one ran from her mouth.
She watched him give in to the temptation to leave, rejoicing in the sound of his steps as they grew more distant. Slowly the feeling of warmth crept back into her body starting with the frigid shoulder his cold fingers startlingly touched. Her surroundings bounded back into the living as the waterfall continued to gurgle and splash and the leaves shook with the trembling wind that so matched her breath. She questioned his motives and if her actions were in the right. She guessed yes as no decent person should love her and as despicable as he is, he shouldn't even be coming near her. She feels her body relax as she listens tot he song bird sing it's tune.

2 comments:
very good Dana!! I had no idea you were such a talented writer!! So... do me and joshy get a link?
I'm looking forward to reading this!
W00t. sweet story dayna i love reading and writing. I like how ur telling like two stories at once. thats soo cool. I write a lot of stories too, but i dont think im brave enough to post any of mine on here, but ima try writing like that from now on. Thanks for the inspiration. =D
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